Positives: Good take on the challenge. I also like the angle of your shot and the way you filled the frame.
Possible Improvements: I really think the B&W takes away from the impact of this shot. Your lighting is also a bit harsh. There are a few white spots that are blown out and the shadows in the bottles are distractive. I think a diffuser of some sort, and lighting from a higher angle would have helped.
I hope you found this critique useful. I look forward to seeing your future entries.
The idea of this is quite poignant and the mundaity severe. However, the image accentuates the mundane and does not make it look particulary extraordinary. I think BW was not the way to go and that the various colors of the drugs might have made it look less mundane. But trying to make this particular subject look other than mundane is quite, thankfully, beyond me.
The title of this photo gives it a lot of emotional appeal.....I guess taking so many pills daily would become very mundane...not to mention sad, but I look at the positive aspect that they are helping.......nice approach and composition...I also like it in black & white....much more powerful
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