I like the set up and idea of the shot! I really like the lighting on the model's hand. That being said the lighting also seems to have taken the candle completely out of the shot for me. The image still scores well from me, but that would be my only area to take a look at.
good idea to use the mirror and the jewelry is a nice touch. the lighting is nice too with the candle. it looks a little soft, but I think maybe you had to hold you hand still, so its understandable. 8
Where does the apply come into this? A reflection of a pretty girl would have perhaps been more fitting. Nice colours and dreamy, blurry lighting effects