NIce shot... very blue :) I think this might have been better in landscape with the majority of the negative space ont he rigt side of the frame rather then with all that neg space at the top... JMO. otherwise it's actually quite nice
this is a great candid(?) portrait, love the different hues of blue.
the negative space above her head kinda bothers me, i cant really tell you why. and maybe try to straighten the background (on the right).
otherwise good work :)