Nice picture, but I think you took it a step too far by saying, "If I were..." whatever sort of thing. This is supposed to be about YOUR part of the world.
Initial=hmmm. Composition=okay Clarity (focus, details)=fairly good detail, but the choice of DOF hampers some of this Exposure=I think this could use a bit more DOF Interesting or Emotive=mildly interesting.
I am using a this new detailed commenting method inspired by autool. (Thanks autool!). I hope you find it more helpful than my former comments. Thanks for submitting, and good luck! ;0) kpb
if you were an electron, you would submit a photo of an electrical charge, something that shows the actual activity instead of a boring motherboard which is out of focus on both ends and nothing really interesting to draw my eyes to.
Interesting photo... the tie-in to the challenge, IMO, is not as strong as it could be. I would love to see more evenly distributed lighting and focus on this image... - jmsetzler
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