The eyes seem over processed (punch them up but keep them real) I think the lighting would have given a more flattering look if from the side and not front on. Otherwise a very nice image. Like the material you have used to drape, has a lovely pattern to it. Well done.
Nice crop of the fact and the face is lit very well. Try making the photo pop a little in photoshop not only in the eyes but in the lips and what she is wearing.
Cheriffic, and cheery, nice to see someone looking so happy! I like the close crip. It would have been nice if you highlighted the catch light in the eyes a little more just to make the sparkle come out. Good luck.