I think that this was a nice idea to begin with. What doesn't do it for me is this:
- the placement within the frame. Photo is cropped a little tight. The offset placement of the cameras is too subtle for me. I would have liked no offset at all or a bolder one.
-The shot is a little grainy, maybe not enough light for the ISO used. Unless that's what you were going for. If so, again too subtle, bold or nothing.
-The camera straps are distracting.
However, the subject depicts the challenge quite well, and the contrast is nicely done. Score: 5 Good job nontheless! Good Luck!