Greetings from the Critique Club :)
First I commend for trying something out of the box. A few things that I notice:
Composition
The composition is not very interesting. The line in the middle is not straight and that detracts. I would straighten the image via crop. The lights might do better is they were positioned more clearly on the thirds lines instead of so close to the outside edge.
Exposure
I am sure this was difficult to expose correctly. The blown out highlights from the bulbs detract. This would have had to be caught in the camera.
The image has good contrast and color. If you only did one thing, I would say straighten the image.
Please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Ken
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