Simple but very interesting composition. Love the different textures that were captured. The shapes of the subjects gives a pleasing focus to your eyes. The vibrant color of the one eye makes for a great focus point. "10"
Technically good work - though those reflections are just a touch strong and single-light source looking - a soft box would have spread them out more and given an overall 'cleaner' appearance. I'm not a big fan of selective de-saturation as a trick - and I don't see a great purpose for it here: you don't quite amange the 'extraordinary' part of the challenge here for me - not beyond that de-saturation anyway.