Initial=Wow! that statue is huge! Composition=good Clarity (focus, details)=needs improvement Exposure=fair Interesting or Emotive=interesting to look at
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my shutterbug pal's always telling me to watch for vertical lines, but the tower ain't all that offensive. it does make me wonder what's at the top, too bad it's cut off. i guess the details in the foreground would've gotten lost if you'd exposed for the sky any more. although the statue and ships might look really cool as silhouettes against a colorful sky.
I think I would have tried to choose one of these elements as the main subject. As it is, the ships (which are cool!) are competing a bit with the statue (which is a little less cool, but still cool :). I may have considered focusing more on the ships as an interesting subject.