Hue/Saturation - Toned down yellow hue and bumped red
Sharpen tool
Curves - Set black
Brightness/Contrast
Neat Image
Dodged/Burned - Eyes/Head
Unsharpen Mask
Save for Web
Statistics
Place: 77 out of 115 Avg (all users): 5.3284 Avg (commenters): 6.7500 Avg (participants): 5.1860 Avg (non-participants): 5.3956 Views since voting: 989 Views during voting: 270 Votes: 134 Comments: 7 Favorites: 0
Hi. I'm responding to your request for comments in a thread. I think the score is about right. The flash creates some pretty strong shadows while also throwing the head into too-bright, flat light. Also, the composition doesn't draw me in. Both of those are personal taste, of course.
Don't quite get what you concept you are trying to convey. From the title, I assume its the bird making the discovery of Drew, but its difficult to figure out what exactly. Horrible flash lighting shadows