this would be great if it had a different title. I'm getting tired of people actually titling things 'untitled'.
Also, the way you have included all that concrete distracts from the most interesting thing- the indian man up there- so it feels like i'm just looking at a sidewalk with no emotional content.
a tighter crop coudl make the picture stronger , I think: leaving out a good part of the street and the shadows on the left. the way your pciture is composed you're leading the viewer to the laft part of your shot.
you have a great subjet here, I would have loved to seen it croped a bit tighter. looks like he has all kinds of details that would be most interesting
strong image indeed. I might suggest trying to get your image size up to 150 kb using the save for web function in Photoshop. Here is a little tutorial if you like on DPC. Your image is 108 kb and you can use up to 150 kb. In a shot as sharp as yours it would allow you to have all the small details be as sharp and clear as possible, for example the edge of the curb and the details in the beard. Hope this helps, good luck in the FS.
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