very nice....the eye shadow person might want to look at this to see what I might have had in mind for that shot.....the detail on the pen is very good and the lighting excellent. Very much like the composition and the pen tip looks great against the tiem in the DOF with the corresponding shining gold on its labe. Well lit.
Nice colour and composition and the lighting works. I like shallow dof but this imo is way too shallow. It would be better composed if the focus was on the entire metal part of the pen.
Pretty pen. Like the dof and the composition. The colors(wb) go well with the subject. I do think the focus would have been more effective on the point of the pen. Focus point depends on what the photographer wants to highlight in the photo, so I guess there could be something else I'm not understanding, sorry.
That light is just golden. I like the angle of the nib and the low DOF throwing out the cap behind it. The background blends well with the golden nib without losing definition of the shape of the nib.