Initial=wow! Composition=well done! is it me, or does the land tilt down from right to left. I see how you made the bridge angle, but with that and the curve of the sidewalk and water, I think it is a bit slanted. Anyway.. love the curve of the sidewalk and water in relation to the linear bridge. Clarity (focus, details)=perfect! Exposure=perfect! Interesting or Emotive=lots for my eye to do in this image. Great!
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God, I've been there so many times. I'm all nostalgic... I lived in Sydney for 4.5 years. This just needed some rotating in the clockwise direction to straighten up that horizon, or perhaps a little bit in the other direction to make it seem more jaunty, otherwise it's just a bit awkward. Nicely framed otherwise.
I feel like I'm tilting all over the place - needs a flater horizon. Wish I could see the top of the tree as well - reminds me of when I climbed this last year.
Looks very pretty but the horizon is a bit off, i feel seasick :) It's a good composition though, the curves of the rive/fence + the bridge. If I were taking this photo, i'd move closer and try to get some of the city into the photo, but that's just me. 7 paganini
real pretty. nice shadows of the fence on the walk. only way it could be better is maybe show the top of the palm tree, or wait for somebody to come walking down towards the foreground. maybe a hot chick.
i love the swooping lines of the walk and arch... my only complaints: the horizon needs to be straight and all of the closest palm should be in the pic (in my opinion) because it's cut off in mid-swoop...7
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