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Challenge: Book Smarts (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot G5
Location: Hong Kong
Date: Nov 15, 2007
Aperture: 4
ISO: 800
Shutter: 1/50
Galleries: Children
Date Uploaded: Nov 15, 2007

 Canon 350D 18-55mm lens

Statistics
Place: 57 out of 63
Avg (all users): 4.2407
Avg (commenters): 3.8182
Avg (participants): 4.0909
Avg (non-participants): 4.2644
Views since voting: 827
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Votes: 241
Comments: 12
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Nikon D5100
Nikon AF-S DX Zoom Nikkor 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 ED
 11/28/2007 05:19:40 PM
Reading over the comments people made... um... people are critical here. haha. Good idea, but it does look like a snap shot. keep trying!!
 Comments Made During the Challenge
Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi
Sigma 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 DC OS for Canon
 11/27/2007 12:34:25 AM
You need to work on the lighting. It looks too snapshottish like this. Too busy also.
Nikon D300
Nikon AF-S DX Zoom Nikkor 17-55mm f/2.8G IF-ED
 11/26/2007 06:28:52 PM
somewhat out of focus. The perspective is interesting.
Nikon D80
Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 18-135mm f/3.5- 5.6G ED DX
 11/26/2007 06:25:02 PM
doesn't hit the spot for me
Nikon D90
Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D
 11/25/2007 09:55:29 PM
Very busy photo, and that blue light to the right of the photo keeps drawing my eye.
Nikon D40X
Nikon AF Nikkor 28-85mm 1:3.5-4.5
11/25/2007 09:29:35 PM
I feel that this image lacks real inspiration . . .I would have loved to have seen more of the subjects face.
Canon EOS-6D
Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8 L USM
 11/25/2007 10:35:29 AM
Two things could improve this. First, correct the whitebalance so the hideous yellow cast of the indoor lighting would go away. Second, how about shooting this from an angle that doesn't leave me with the impression that the photographer simply walked up behind this girl and took a snapshot? Seeing her face would be nice, or really any other angle that gave me a more intimate view of the person studying. I feel like someone passing through the hallway and glancing into a dorm room.
Nikon D40
Nikon AF-S Zoom-Nikkor 70-300mm f/4.5-5.6G IF-ED VR
 11/24/2007 08:43:08 PM
THIS IS WHAT I CALL WORKING!!
Pentax Optio W10
 11/23/2007 12:46:47 PM
you could have shown her face.
Canon PowerShot A75
 11/22/2007 11:34:34 AM
Save shots like these for myspace, there's nothing 'beautiful' or evocative about this.
Canon EOS-5D Mark IV
Canon EF 100-400mm f/4.5-5.6 L IS
 11/22/2007 07:06:47 AM
Technicals: 0.5/2 - no clear focus, yellowish cast, undefined DOF

Composition: 0/2 - snapshottish, no effort on composition or lighting visible

Challenge Relation: 1.5/2

Originality/Creativity: 0/2

Overall Impact: 0/2

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Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Canon EF 28-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
 11/21/2007 09:02:20 AM
Great idea. She really looks like she's studying. The white balance seems off, and it appears to lack sharpness.
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