Hi Z,
I like the colors here & the placement of your main subject. After that it just seems to go all down hill. The hand you used for the bokeh just seems way out of place and is more of a distraction then anything else. I would have eleminated the whole right side of the image and tried to use his hand & forearm as the bokeh. The overall image itself seems to be out of focus (got the feeling u are hand held here). I think moving left and closer may have been of some help. Your choice of setting here I don\'t understand either 1.8 500 125 ?. Overall a nice effort that just fell short. |