Yep, that's in the right order. :) I'd like a closer crop on this on, so she's right on the edge of the frame, or even slightly off it. Maybe you'd have to raise the camera angle to keep her distinctive pose in the frame. But, a great idea for the photo and title.
Slightly funny and slightly offensive! I like the concept of this shot, but think the background (storage containers) take away from the subjects rather than instill a sense of industrial.