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Comments Made During the Challenge
11/20/2007 05:55:59 PMPost actions
Meets Challenge - 1
Technicality - 1
Creativity - 1
Biased Opinion - 0
11/20/2007 04:22:05 PMPost actions
Why have the pineapple there? A simple well lit shot of the model against a neural background would be so much better
11/20/2007 04:07:24 PMPost actions
background is not set up very well and lighting is off. just not done well
11/20/2007 02:22:07 PMPost actions
Good composition, for the most part. It appears that you used a flash and this really flattened things out. Try diffusing it or bouncing it if possible.
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11/19/2007 02:07:49 AMPost actions
The lighting used is a bit hrash in this shot.
11/19/2007 01:10:46 AMPost actions
over thought-out, and bland colors. But Good Idea
11/18/2007 05:51:33 PMPost actions
Bad lighting, bad composition, what else must i say.
11/17/2007 10:43:44 PMPost actions
fairly harsh lighting here, like the knick-knack tho /5
11/17/2007 02:13:26 PMPost actions
This looks washed out from a flash used at close range.
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11/16/2007 04:07:47 PMPost actions
what a funny image, and I enjoy the addition of the pineapple. However the direct flash really hurts you. You might try using a piece of typing paper in front of your flash to help defuse it a bit. It really works nicely.
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11/16/2007 01:49:41 PMPost actions
All items are in focus. I can slightly see the strings on the ukulele....but i think it needs more detail.
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11/15/2007 08:58:43 PMPost actions
Lighting seems a little harsh.
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11/15/2007 06:55:12 PMPost actions
The color is bad and it looks like a pointless snapshot
11/14/2007 08:25:35 PMPost actions
nice touch with the pineapple...it has a cool texture, why not make it the background? as the black sheet with the creases doesn't really strengthen the image. of course you'd have to zoom in a bunch...maybe just get the very top of the skirt in the image
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11/14/2007 06:38:13 PMPost actions
A bit out of focus, and it came over a bit bright on my monitor.
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11/14/2007 04:48:13 PMPost actions
Cute idea, but did you use the flash? It's a little bright...and therefore flat.
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11/14/2007 11:54:57 AMPost actions
Nice idea using a pineapple.. but the colors are washed out, and the wrinkled background is distracting.
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11/14/2007 08:15:10 AMPost actions