This was my alternate choice for duotones but I went with the closer squarish crop based on a remark from simms regarding using as much space as possible in this small format we're limited to. This is the version I printed for myself.
Deb, I actually prefer this crop of the two of them - the only picky picky thing for me is I would like to see the dark bar on the right of the picture cloned out as it distracts a little from this very striking young lady.