I perhaps see your point, but the fringes of these ares of colour are messy and disorganised I find it difficult to like. The lighting isn't helping any either, being pretty flat, and the exposure could have made a brighter image - it's all very muddy looking here.
A little more sharpness might have scored another point, but this isn't bad by any stretch of the imagination. The colors, and nearly parrallel lines running left/right are interesting.