this has the potential for a very cool shot; focus either needs to be tweaked or dof needs to be less shallow so that more of the detail and texture of the subject comes through; lighting is a little harsh
a pretty version of a known theme, very nice. i'd sharpen it more... most pictures look unnatural when sharpened too much. i think this one wouldn't. and: the white something in the lower third distracts. still an 8 for me