I like the idea of shooting an old piano for this challenge.
Technically speaking, the shot is pretty good. There is a good range of lights and darks, and there is a nice focus on the piano keys.
Compositionally, this photo could use some work. The angle you have chosen has lots of diagonal lines that run from the top of the photo to the bottom. The viewers eyes follow this path, and basically run off the page. The repeated pattern of the piano keys also leads our eyes off the page, as there isn't much to break up the repetition.
I find the blue light to be very distracting. Instead of showcasing the piano, the blue light becomes the main subject because it is so bright and intense. I also find that the blue light contradicts the subject of something old. The strong blue light reminds me of a neon sign in a bar, and I wouldn't consider a neon sign as something old.
The image also seems to be oversharpened, as there is a halo around many of the keys.
I hope this is helpful. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me.
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