Pretty cool! I may have been tempted to leave out the other building and the motorcycle, while focusing in more on the tables/main building. Perhaps standing a few steps to the left could have accomplished that...?
That's quite a coffee place! The black and white doesn't really work for me here-- probably because it masks a lot of the detail to be found in the beautiful old buiilding. --5-- sohr
Is that tree on the left really necessary to be in this composition? I find the building interesting, especially the one with the two openings. I also think that a vertical compositio nworks better -- move 3-4 steps to the right, making the building a bit symmetrical, go vertical on your camera, move a bit closer so that the seats, table, shade be a main interesting and let the contrast between the white umbrella and the nice texture of the building do the talking. The tree and the open space on the left is just too distracting, for me. 6 paganini
Needs stronger composition, maybe if it had been taken portrait, instead of landscapped to see more of the building behind. Just leaves me wanting to see more of the surroundings...
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