Nice take on the homeless and a different approach to the shot with the three types of subjects. I like the static homeless guy and the slower motion in the background and then the faster motion in the forground. It all makes sence and works well together in the shot. In minimal edit there is nothing we can do with the shadows but it works pretty good anyway. The tones are good and the contrast under different edit rukes needs a boost.
That being said I think it works well and I hope that you do well with it in this challenge.
I don't like the composition here, I'm not really sure what the picture is trying to say. Maybe getting closer to the homeless guy and making more of a feature of the composition would improve things in my opinion?
I kind of like this composition. But the graphical balance of the two contrasting types of life is not optimaly achieved since the homeless on the floor is relatively too small