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02/21/2004 09:53:04 AMPost actions
**Critique Club**
Hi Ellamay!
400 shots...wow, you definately did have a very patient subject.
You followed the rule of thirds nicely. The black on black composition is great and the subtle lighting is just enough to seperate the subject from the background on the right. They eyes really grab your attention when you first look at this. You have a nice sharp focus, allowing good detail on the eyes.
Possible improvements:
I think maybe just a little light from the top or top-right would have helped define the top of the head of your subject better.
Overall a nice photo that is pleasing to look at.
-Chris
Comments Made During the Challenge
02/20/2004 06:10:37 PMPost actions
Very moving portrait. fantastic work. 10
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02/18/2004 02:47:47 PMPost actions
Blue and browneyed? Nice.
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02/18/2004 01:49:41 PMPost actions
still the best today, good pic, black on black, great eyes,
well done
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02/17/2004 08:10:52 PMPost actions
it looks as if the face was copied and pasted
02/17/2004 03:21:24 PMPost actions
Was the red eye intentional or accidental. Very interesting shot.
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02/17/2004 01:51:44 PMPost actions
Great photo, hope you get a decent position with this
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02/17/2004 08:44:14 AMPost actions
I like this. Great composition and highly provocative.
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02/17/2004 07:59:23 AMPost actions
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02/16/2004 06:17:35 PMPost actions
very dramatic effect with the lighting and subject matter.
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02/16/2004 04:55:03 PMPost actions
Very nice! Like the concept and the lighting.
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02/16/2004 03:34:51 PMPost actions
Neat. But the two colors of the eyes bothered me. It was the attention getter rather than the girl peering out of the darkness.
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02/16/2004 01:17:32 PMPost actions
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