I think this is a great image given the circumstances that you must have taken them in. Unfortunately maybe given the nature of the challenge it could have done with a more 'dramatic' front page title (although hopefully people will vote on shot quality)
I guess there are a couple of minor technical issues with the shot, but given that this was done in a minimal challenge I applaud you
not the greatest shot, but definitely has potential as a pj shot. if your equipment can handle it, try shooting this without the flash. also, try to find a different perspective than straight-on eye-level documentation.