Haha, not because you love learning, or want to make the world a better place, or want to reach your potential. Just a flash car. Man, I hate materialism. Anyway, your model needs more light... offboard carefully bounced flash is badly needed here. You don't have great reflections on the car, this needed more thought. Were you trying to light your model with the lights from another car? This hasn't worked, as the light isn't high enough. The sky is very poor, and really makes the shoot look amateur. You needed a little more dof so the background skyline would be in focus. It doesn't look good here. Or far more blurred. The model's clothes don't work well for this concept, not classy or thought out at all. Not a compelling expression either. He almost has a tower growing from his head... I don't feel that you were aware of the composition of how his head blends with the background. A far more inventive shot may have been to bring a very high stepladder so you could get the same shot with the same background but looking down on him.
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