Brian, I think this might work better with diffuse lighting instead of straight on. It also might help to have something showing through the door to give it some depth. Did you fingers hit random keys as you entered the title, or were you making a self-reference about letters that didn't fit? :)
I like the idea but the light is a bit too harsh and the pencils seem to be arranged in a hurry (some of them show the writing on the pencil, some don't).