There's a reasonable amount of intrigue here, I'm left wondering what they're looking at. I wonder if you could have been more daring with the negative space you've created. There's also something about the colour of the grass which doesn't seem lifelike to me, perhaps this is a contender for an effective black and white conversion?
I can tell you made some effort with this, but it mostly comes off as a good snapshot. The path draws my eye away from the subjects and toward the other corner.
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