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its nice but i think its just too blurry. maybe thats just me. kinda hurts my eyes.
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I like the soft tones of this shot a lot, but I feel like I'd like to see a little more of the pencil in better focus. Overall, I like the shallow DOF, but this shot would have some serious POP to it if the eraser was solidly in crisp detail.
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this gets a 10 from me
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Way too out of focus, but the idea works.
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Maybe sharper focus on the tip of the eraser
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not sure about the title...I think of a dart
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The dof is kinda off... would have definitely liked more focus on the point of contact..
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This could of been pretty good, however, there is no focus anywhere in the shot. pity really. 5
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Nice idea - but I wish something was in focus
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Shallow depth of field still needs a focal point
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Color looks to be off a bit. I would like to see at least part of the pencil in foucs. It looks like the entire photo is just "out of focus".
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The focusing is way way too shallow...
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Unfortunately, nothing in the photo is in focus.
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Nice concept, just a bit too blurred for my liking.
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This seems overexposed to me.
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Just too blurry...nothing looks sharp. Not a bad idea though (just like mine;)
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Duh, I don't get it. focus sucks. a good photo grabs you. this one loses me. 2.
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I like your idea. For me, if there was more focus on the pencil or having "feathers" on the "dart", I would have scored it higher.
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nice DOF, although I think you've oversoftened it a bit
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Most of this shot is out of focus
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Not enough in focus IMHO. 5
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Ahhh...groovy comes to mind! Love your totally, cool image. The colors and DOF work so well with this wild image! Love it.
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For me everything is way to out of focus, in fact, at least at this resolution, it doesn't look like anything is in focus. I like the shot, but I would like to see more of the board the pencil is stuck in.
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Nice... kinda like an abstract but also very recognizable too.
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Great idea, just a little "too" out of focus for the "impact" though IMO
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