With the closeup of the subject almost seems like the terrace landscaping or the sand of a desert blown by the wind. The very shallow depth of field isolates the texture of the corduroy.
I would like to see a version maybe with less shallow focusing. I think it would give the composition a more dramatic and interesting feeling. "9"
Interesting idea - some (small) suggestion of ploughed fields, though one would need to see more stuff to get that impression more strongly. Seems a little under-lit, or underexposed - all the tones have fallen into a kind of mid-range, rather than using a broader scal of intensity that might have allowed a greater sense of feel. Pretty shallow depth of field doesn't allow one to see the alteration of texture as the angle to the light changes, either.
I haen't seen that stuff for a long time. I like the abstract value. I love that part. But, perhaps a little sharper with the focus and bring in a bit more lighting. It will help. Good DOF too. Good luck!
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