Very creative idea! I like the composition but find that the light is a bit too harsh. I would have liked to see the pencil hidden a bit between the pasta, so that I have to look for it. Having it so prominently displayed takes away a bit from the photo, in my opinion.
Your image made me smile when I saw it. Probably because it wasn't another "chopstick" image. Lol. I like your idea. I wish there was more contrast with the shadows beneath the spaghetti - but that's me.