I always love this pose, the angle of it, as it forces you to look right into her eyes with everything else going out of focus with shallow DOF. IMO, you've done very well here. The only complaint would be the hose or whatever the green line is. But you can easily fix that in post, so no problem there. But I gotta say this: Wow! What beautiful eyes she has!!!
Its a Fairly Nice Photograph and you are probably well pleased with your result.
The Girl Probably turned up with what she thought was nice and smart looking.
The Problem I have with it, whch is no fault of your own, but the Black Veil is totaly invisable against her very Black Hair and Her Face is a Bit bright against the dramatic Black.
If The Girl had A white Veil it would be completely different in my honest opinion.
Nice Photo Though !
No the veil is cool, just dont like how tight it is by her right eye, but thats very minor. agree with getting rid of the green stripe and there is a hint of blue on the bottom of the image against her right arm. Other than that, another great shot
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