I love the freaked out color, and that you're not looking into the subject straight on. Their head appears to be at a substantial angle, and it adds a nice tension to the stare. I bet you're going to get hammered for an eye picture, though. :)
I applaud the effort but really don't find much about this that works. Colors are off, texture is not terribly effident, focus is questionable and reflection (although I'm sure difficult to avoid) is a huge distraction.
Another eyeball! I'm just not a fan of the eyeball shots :(. This one is done okay, although the yellowish cast to it takes away. I would have cropped it tighter around the eyeball, with less surrounding skin.
Bizarre tones, interesting reflection - though the most interesting thing for me is trying to work out what that word is, and then trying to understand its relevance. As far as a quality of reflectiveness is a quality of texture this is OK - but the other things goig on don't make that the primary interst of this shot, and thus not what it's about. Don't understand the colour-cast, don't see a point to it.