I can't believe you didn't get ANY comments! Shame on us.
I didn't vote on this challenge, but I'd probably have given it a 5 or 6.
The rich tones and sharpness are nice, but I find myself longing for more to look at. Does that make sense? The extremely shallow DOF leads the eye to a spot, but there isn't a whole lot to see there. Where's jutildawhen you need her? She always says these things so much better.
I also think the composition might be more interesting if it were somehow less symmetrical and straight-on. I'm sure you wanted to break away from the same-old rule of thirds thing, but in this case I feel it might have helped.
Overall, a fine image and surely deserving of some comments. |