Initial=sweet Composition=nice arrangement Clarity (focus, details)=good clarity and focus. Exposure=good exposure. Interesting or Emotive=elicits warm feelings, but yet, the position of the man's hand seems to be more of a grip than a soft touch. Sort-of too possessive. I think a different kind of lighting would give the subject depth as well.
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I am rating this shot lower becuase this scene is not specific to your corner of the world. I can see the same setting here is CA. Not exactly specific to you or your corner of the world. Good work . 7
Technically correct7 , exposure7, focus7, saturation(oversaturated) 6, contrast: 7 Good composition. 7 Tells a story or creates a mood 7 Impact to the viewer 7 Relevance to the Challenge 6 overall 7 sulamk
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