I like the choice in subject and the detail you were able to capture.
But to be honest, I think you missed the mark. The problem is the white/featureless background which is doing you no favors, IMO. Using it is like putting your subject under a microscope. It makes your subject look too clinical/analytical in appearance. Not only that but it robs the viewer of seeing this subject in it's proper context.
This is not to dismiss your opinion since as the author you can more easily connect with it but for the rest of us we need to see more, more context in which to identify and understand your vision. |