Good attempt at telling a story. Would like to see more of the keys in focus, and maybe a bit less of the distracting odds & ends in the background. Also adjust the white balance. Too yellow.
I really like the keys in the foreground, but the background serves to distract me. I think we are looking into a mirror, and while i like that the blur on what appears to be the person detracts severely from the keys I like so much.
i wish i had a nickel for everyone on this site who couldn't be bothered to spend a couple extra seconds and figure out that was someone dumping out a bag or purse. i can't figure out how you got the wall to blur unless you used a photoshop filter. but i think that overall blur makes for an odd alternate kind of universe feel. One with our harried lives and everything spinning out of control and the other where hidden keys live that's all mellow and relaxed and totally stationary.
very nice point of view - I like the composition. I would prefer to see this with a more neutral white balance - there's an orange cast from the incandescent lighting.
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