This focus was great at this subject. To me it confuses a bit. It´s hard to view clearly the principal subject. It is a great shoot. I wish you had used the rule of thirds on it to clarify your subject.
I like the flower in the drop. However I think this is the seventeenth drop I have seen in this competition, and while yours is the best yet, it hurts the score to be in such a large group. I promise to revisit later and either bump this score or lower the scores of the other drops.