my biggest criticism is that i see two pictures here, divide the picture vertically right down the middle and you have two nice pictures that both use neg space well
Nice idea. Because the some buildings are in shadow I'm sort of seeing two competing areas of neg space, the black and the sky - and they aren't merging so it feels unbalanced. I know this is one of my least clear and least helpful comments, apologies. Articulate NOT! 5, Kavey
For this challenge, I like this shot a lot. That one kind of gothic building just stands out brilliantly amont the sky scrapers and the reason it stands out so much is because of the shadows and forms of the space around it.
There's just too much going on in this picture. I'm assuming your main subject is on the right with the glowing lights. Try and crop out what's on the left