Horrible yellow tint to this image, this could of been corrected by adjusting the white balance during post processing. The composition is good. but overall its a pretty average shot.. 6
I like the overall setting and composition. Nice use of the stairs, without overdoing. I do not like the facial expressions however, and they are quite fundamental in portraits. Furthermore, the crop is pretty tight on the left hand side and you leave a stretch of white on the right hand side. (4)
Well the white on the right side has me baffled. I think I would have cropped that out as it doesnt really add to the image and is not really a border unless it goes all the way around the image. The image also looks a tad red to me. But it has potential maybe by posing them a little more could have really perked this image up. Keep after it! :-)