Nice soft look. I like the white drape. The exposure was just right for the white drape. I don't know, maybe the face could come up just a little bit. I think that I would try to retouch some of the blemishes on the face and arms. I like the composition and balance. It keeps me within the frame of the picture. Title good! The more I look at this the more I like it. If this was sharpened, it was just right.
Nice soft capture of a pensive moment. I like the lighting and the juxtaposition of the white curtain with the dark shadow. I wonder if the shadows were lightened just enough to bring some detail in her hair if this would have been even better. Well done.
Pose looks forced to me. Lighting is nice. I like the inclusion of the watch, as if she is a "normal" person and not a model... this counteracts some of the "forced-ness" of the pose, I think.
I love the mood of your picture. the warm dark tone do support the story. the only thing disturbing is the watch. The har covering one eye is a nice touch and makes the shot feel very real and natural
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