It looks to me more like "Just a girl posing for a photo, waiting for a bus." I would have liked this better if she weren't looking at the camer, and with perhaps a different background? Not sure if that was possible or not.
The photo dosen't really show that she is waiting for a bus or anything really. She looks kinda annoyed that there is a camera in her face. Lighting is good, pose and background could be better.
I rated this one high because of the emotions and intense look of your subject. I don't like the color and hue of the photo, it looks like the white balance was not set correctly. Was this a candid photo or did she agree to have her photo taken?
She doesn't look pleased with you for shooting her but the result is quite nice. It has an ever so slight greenish tint to it but it doesn't really bother me.
Great image - she's not thrilled with you taking her photo - but she has such an interesting face - glad you did. A bit of USM and maybe some burning on the building behind may have 'popped' her off the screen a bit more.