Two suggestions.
1. IMNSHO, this would be better if you cropped the left side so the edge of her headband is in the upper left of the shot.
2. There is a highlight on her nose that distracts me. Again, IMNSHO, a little burning would get rid of it.
I love the way you rendered her skin tones, and the grain really adds to the shot. She looks to be a woman of great character and intelligence. Good work!
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