Attempting to catch the morning mist at the local park before hundreds of kids turn up to play football and rugby. Starts with the youngest who look no bigger than the ball and increasing in age as the morning progresses.
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I do like color. What was the color version like? the fence takes me right out of the picture and quickly. There is not much left after that. Maybe a close landscape crop of the fence would have made a better composition.
I love the ethereal nature of this one. just a hint of the trees through the fog. Just wish the fence had started its journey through the frame from another spot, maybe a little more to the right. but nice shot, nonetheless.
Unfortunatly a hand rail really does not hold much of a WoW factor, maybe if it was cropped just above the tree line and the rail disappeared into the fog rather than off the side.
I like the mist. It took my eyes a moment to see the background tree line. I do wish there was one element or some other focal point. something like a person or animal or something to give a bit more added interest.
I do often like mist shots but this one has a bit too much mist. The rail isnt an interesting enough subject to really carry the image and the background is just lost in the mist.
Its running off the page. To me, the fence/rail needs to begin a bit more on right side and continue to the center to keep my eye from sliding off the edge..