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I really like the image I think you probably had in your head, but I don't think you've quite pulled it off. Whatever that is in the top left-hand corner (a hand holding something?) is really distracting, and I think overall the background would be better a little more out of focus (is that real shallow DOF or Photoshop?). I don't know how much control you had over the surroundings, but if you could have reduced the clutter on the table down to fewer items (and ideally moved the bubblegum machine) then I think it would be less distracting. Finally, I would personally crop the top off at around the height of where the top of the menu is now because I think that would make for a stronger composition. |