Perhaps a different kind of lighting would prevent the red eye (girl at top). Also, I wonder how this would look if cropped tighter into their faces and made into a vertical format?
All around the internet, you find webpages of teenage girls posing weird poses with funny faces, while photographing themselves with their camera-with-built-in-flash, causing blown highlights on the skins and harsh shadows. At least, yours is in focus and does not have a living room as a background. (3)
I am trying to understand the reason you cropped the picture this way, I can't come up with an answer. Also, the advanced editing rules would have allowed you to correct the red eyes.