Good concept, just the bright parts are too hot. If it were toned down just a little and the focus was just a little sharper it would be a more successful picture.
This is a very unique composition. I love the colors and the sharpness of it. The only thing that distracts my eye is the little hot spot near the middle left. But still a great photo. Very nice use of shadows and light.
Nice shot, but the shadow and highlights seem a bit to much contrast. The little white burnt out spot is a touch distracting. I like the shape and idea very much tho