For me, the horizon could be rotated slightly counter-clockwise to make it even. Also, I wonder how this would look if the horizon line itself was raised or lowered and not in the "dead" center? I do like the colors of the sky and the star shaped lights.
This is probably a very nice scene handicaped by the size restrictions. I don't really like the way the phot has been devided ito halves, sky / Ground Maybe with a little more of the ground left in the crop you could have added foreground and devided the scene into 3 parts making it a stronger photo.
Through no fault of your own, the size limitation doesn't do this picture justice... normally i can look past that if the scene is interesting enough and i can pick out enough detail.
In this case i can't and the detail would only come visible in a larger size.
2nd part is the soccer field. You have beautiful shade of purple on the horizon , soft lights and then this bright white patch on the right. Its like looking at stars and then having a car turn on its headlights in front of your... eyes flow toward the light.