Your image appears really blown out to me. Her nose is all but lost. It also looks a bit oversharpened. I do like the angle and I think your concept is good.
Voted low, can barely make out key facial details, find it too over exposed and blown. She appears to be being pushed forward by the chair or black leatherish object behind her.
This is going to bomb I'm afraid. The image is obviously taken with a very low quality camera (camera phone?) and the subject is completely blown out by the flash. Even without these flaws the shot isn't interesting enough to compete in a free study.