POSITIVES:
Interesting and recognizable subject
Tones
Lighting
Focus
POV
NEGATIVES:
Border: Unnecessarily large and tone(s). No matter where I look within the photograph my peripheral vision draws my eyes to the border.
Negative space: Possibly to much negative space (sky). Maybe a crop on the left would of been good to make the subject(s) larger, IMO.
Very NICE!!! One of the best I've seen so far! I love the scale that the people in this give the photo. I'm a freak about perspective shots. I LOVE them! Fabulous work!